Run-on Sentences (r-o)
Independent clauses must be separated by a period
(.) or a semi-
colon (;) or combined with a coordinator or subordinator. If they
are not properly separated or combined, the result is called a run-on sentence:
1. *An old woman lived in
the house, she surprised Hansel and
Gretel they were eating parts
of her house.
Possible corrections:
2. An old woman lived in
the house. She surprised Hansel and
and Gretel. They were
eating parts of her house.
3. The old woman
who
lived in the house surprised Hansel and
Gretel
as they were
eating parts of her house.
Sometimes a period or semicolon is the best way
to fix a run-on, but very often the use of a coordinator or subordinator will
make the
meaning clearer and the style smoother. Think about it; don't always
choose the easiest correction.
Links:
Fixing run-ons:
runons
Punctuation, subordinators, transitionals:
runon1.htm
Another one:
runon2.htm