Thesis Statement
Just as the topic sentence gives the main idea of a paragraph, the thesis statement states the main idea, or the purpose, of the complete essay. The thesis statement is usually the last sentence of the introduction. Here is an introductory paragraph, from a student essay, with the thesis given four different ways:
TV or Not TV?
Watching television is almost a ritual in our society. There
are some people who turn on the TV as
soon as they get
up in the morning. There are
some people who have to
have the TV on while eating lunch or
dinner. There are
people who turn on the TV as soon as
they get home from
work or school. For most of us,
watching TV is part of
our daily routine.
Is this good for us?
Or:
This paper will consider the effect of
watching so much
TV.
Or: However, watching so much TV makes us unhappy.
Or:
However, watching so much TV makes us unhappy
because it makes us dissatisfied with our own lives.
Here is another example:
Plants Against Cancer
In the
past there was no hope for patients with cancer.
All they could do was wait to die.
Fortunately, now we
have a much better chance against
cancer due to the
identification of risk factors,
advanced technologies for
detecting cancer, and innovative
therapies. However,
what I want to focus on here is not
detection and remedies,
but preventing cancer before it
appears. There is a low-
tech, natural way to prevent cancer,
by using plants. How
can plants prevent cancer?
Or:
In this paper I will consider why plants
are good for preventing
cancer.
Or:
Many plants are effective in preventing
cancer because they
contain anti-oxidants, enzymes and fiber.
Notice that these kinds of thesis statement are somewhat different:
States topic:
Is this good for us?
How can plants prevent cancer?
States purpose: This paper will
consider the effect of watching
so much TV.
In this paper I will consider why plants are good
for preventing cancer,
States idea: However, watching so much TV makes us unhappy.
States idea
more exactly: However, watching so
much TV makes us unhappy
because it makes us dissatisfied with our own lives.
Many plants are effective in preventing cancer
because they contain anti-oxidants, enzymes and
fiber.
It is easiest to state the topic with a question, or state your purpose; however, in my opinion, it is better to state your idea rather exactly. An idea-thesis really indicates what will follow in the paper. An exact idea-thesis also indicates what organization the reader can expect.
The thesis is the most important sentence in your
paper because it controls the entire paper. Every paragraph must relate in
a clear way to the thesis. If it doesn't your paper has lost its focus, or
unity.